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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Thu Jul 08, 2010 8:50 pm | |
| You already tried to get rid of me by shooting me in your story. xD | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:18 pm | |
| BUT I didn't kill you. That's good. Right?
XD
Actually I have a violent attack planned against ME, but that takes place in a much, much later chapter. And there is character death. Just not you. XD | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Thu Jul 08, 2010 11:16 pm | |
| Hey, Socky...? Write more. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 10:28 am | |
| Dude. Branch is going to destroy me. Is that what you want to happen to your old pal Socko? D:
...Why am I even asking that? Of course it is. XD Just give me some time to type because I'm trying to figure out who kidnapped Lisa, where she is, and why they kidnapped her. So. XD | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:05 am | |
| Okay, chapter 2. We find out Lisa's middle name, the name of the guy who got *ahem* taken care of in Whoopsidaisy, and, apparently, Anna has a date! -ducks from the incoming shellfire- OH, and I couldn't think of a quote for this chapter. Any suggestions? - Spoiler:
CHAPTER 2
While Lauren munched on chicken nuggets and Subs and Ben both ate a burger, I continued on my third Baconator.
What? I can go without food for days, but when I'm hungry, I'm really hungry.
A couple of preteen girls were fawning over Ben as he ate, asking him why he had a cast. He told them he was in a bank and a man pulled out a gun, so he punched him and broke his arm.
And the girls believed him.
I rolled my eyes and frowned at the girls, then leaned over to them. "Yeah, Ben, when are you going to tell them about how you broke your arm falling out of a tree when you got your sister's kite stuck in it?" I inquired loudly.
The young girls exchanged a glance, then pranced over to Jay, who was trying to enjoy his Frostie in peace. As they giggled, Becca's expression became darker and darker. Finally, she tapped one on the shoulder. She whispered something in the girl's ear, and she squealed. She appeared to tell her friends whatever Becca wanted them to know, then they shared a collective look of horror as they scattered. Becca sipped her soda with a triumphant look, and Subs gave her a high-five. Jay just looked relieved, and shot her a grateful expression.
A boy with blond hair, gelled to the max, was walking past us when he hooked his right toes around his left heel and stumbled, spilling his drink on Anna.
That was a stage trip! I narrowed my eyes at him while everyone else grabbed napkins from the dispenser on our table and helped Anna.
"Oh, God, I'm so sorry!" the boy exclaimed, placing his now empty cup on our table and reaching for the napkins. Beside me, Ben flinched as he passed napkins to Anna. I knew he didn't like it when people casually said "God". Sometimes, that boy could go religious on your butt.
Anna managed a small smile. "It's okay," she replied. "Happens to all of us."
The boy smiled back. "I'm Tyler."
"Anna."
"Uh, I really am sorry. Are you all better now?"
Anna nodded.
I frowned. Creepy faker hitting on MY friend? No way. "Well, thanks for spilling your drink on her and then cleaning it up, but we no longer require your assistance, Guido. Have a nice day." I gave him the universal "shoo" motion with my hand.
"Daniel!" Anna's tone was scolding.
"Did you just call me 'Daniel'?!" I laughed.
"Hey, leave her alone!" Tyler snapped. "She said what she said and you have no right to make fun of her for it!"
I raised my eyebrows. "Well, I've obviously read my rights wrong!"
Anna shot me a deadly glare before turning back to Tyler. "Sorry, he's...he's difficult, sometimes."
Tyler glanced at me warily. "Right...you're pretty, uh, cool. Want to hang out sometime?"
"She's busy!" I interjected quickly.
"No, I'm not, so shut up, Daniel McGavok!" Anna retorted.
Daniel McGavok? She totally just called me by my full name. She was sticking up for a guy she'd met a minute ago, rather than the guy she'd known (online) for years?
Now, does that make any sense to you?
"Great! How about a movie?" Tyler pulled out a cell phone. "What's your number?"
"429-8776. Yours?"
"500-2381."
"Cool. Um, call you later?"
"I'll call you."
"Okay! Bye, Tyler!"
"Bye!"
I made a loud huffing noise. "He's no good."
"Danny!" Anna folded her arms defiantly.
"Did you see him fall? That was faker than...than a lot of stuff!" I declared, biting down on my Baconator.
Anna made a handgun gesture with her fingers and pretended to shoot me. "Let it go."
I stood up and gathered the wrappers and stray paper material, along with my half-eaten Baconator. "I'm done." I announced. "I'll be back at hq. Ben?"
Ben sighed and finished his burger. "Yup. I'll come with."
I dropped everything in the trashcan and held open the door for Ben as he waved to Mr. Moriarty, the limo chauffeur. Thing I like best about him is he doesn't question it when only two of us walk out, he just goes with it. Ben and I slid inside and I made sure to buckle my seatbelt.
...
Lisa Renee Hammons was in trouble.
Deep, deep trouble.
She blinked slowly, her breathing shallow, as the gag was removed from her face and she could inhale properly. A woman, in an outfit close to her own, was seated at a table accross the room.
Her hair was dark brown, almost wavy, and she had emerald eyes.
The woman was frowning and working on a computer, occasionally sighing and crossing her legs in frustration. Beside her, a middle-aged man with a black crew-cut and goatee sat staring at papers. And standing in front of Lisa was another man with short, wavy, dark reddish hair.
"I suppose you're wondering why you're here..." he began smugly.
"Not at all," Lisa spat. "I'm wondering which one of you I should kill first."
"Well, your wretched agency of children got in our way a few weeks ago, if you remember." the man went on. "I know you're trying to figure out multiple things--who our new young financial director is, who the man is you killed..."
"Our resident psychopath killed him." Lisa interrupted matter-of-factly.
The man smiled, "Yes, well, things aren't looking good for you or your kids, are they? In fact, one is already set in the crosshairs of our trap. It's only a matter of time before the rest follow. Oh, and the kid who killed my partner Jonathan Pall? I'll make sure something special is set up for him...and everyone who can help him."
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:35 am | |
| OH WIN!
*pokes Tyler* Dude, back off. o.O
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:55 am | |
| Hehe,
-whispers in chick's ear- 'He's gay. You're wasting your time.'
XDDDDD
That is sadly what I was thinking the entire time.
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PLEASE WRITE MORE SOCKY. PLEASE. THE WORLD NEEDS IT. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:21 pm | |
| Thanks Rebecca. xD
I'm STRAIGHT. xD
I have a feeling Branch is going to bury you alive. xD
MORE. NOW. PLEASE. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:57 pm | |
| Where's the chapters, I can't find dem? I don't see them on the front. (I fail, don't remind me. xD) | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:13 pm | |
| They're scattered around. xD The second chapter is at the top of the page. In the spoiler. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:22 pm | |
| D: I DON'T WANT A DATE.
I USED YOUR FULL NAME, SUCKA. ;D
NOW HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE PLEASE? | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:34 pm | |
| Yuppins, in My Bad, I've been posting the chapter along with the "updated!" post. But I DO update the questions, references, and topic name. If I remember. P:
Yeah, you sure showed me, Branch. Using my full name and whatnot. XD | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:35 pm | |
| moarmoarmaormoarmoar plz.  :D YAYZ. Seriously, I know you probably think that we are all pretending to like this because we're nice and all, but IT SERIOUSLY IS ENTERTAINING AND I LIKE IT. So STOP COMPLAINING ABOUT HOW EVERYONE LOVES YOU.  | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 5:58 pm | |
| YOU SHUT UP. I HAVE A RIGHT TO LOW SELF-ESTEEM. XD | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 6:56 pm | |
| I would totally high-five Rebby if she said you were gay to the girl, Jay. In fact, I would've told her to say it.
Or you were a Nickelback fan.
Apparently no one likes them. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:04 pm | |
| xD- WAIT WHAT?
I LOVE NICKELBACK.
(Clarification - THE OLD NICKELBACK)
D=
They were one of the best bands! Until they started making that pop cru-[/spammyrant]
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Hehe, to make this none spam.
WRITE MORE NOW, SOCK. xD | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:15 pm | |
| Oh, I don't mind.
I LOVED Nickelback, but now they've got some pop-ish stuff it's stupid. And it's no secret that I hate POP and RAP and HIP-HOP. I like ROCK and ALTERNATIVE and INSTRUMENTAL, and I can't comprehend why people would prefer autotune to actual instruments playing. Yeesh.
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 7:17 pm | |
| .. Wait, did the creepy evil dude say someone was in the middle of a trap or something?
Well, now you've got another crazy child hounding you for more.
NOW, WRITE MOAR. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 8:10 pm | |
| CHAPTER 3. Since Otter gets upset whenever I tell him the horrible, horrible truth that he is, in fact, an extrovert, I gave him an intro of thinking about stuff. And I don't know that Otter has any annoying habits, but I guess I have plenty, so. YUP. - Spoiler:
CHAPTER 3
"Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more."
Everyone has a breaking point.
I've never been close to it, nor has anyone else I've known.
Except maybe Dan.
He's the only guy I know that's an inch away from snapping.
And that worries me.
With symptoms bordering on the bipolar and some dreadful case of insomnia, it scares me that he would be the one to break under the pressure.
Because if that happened, I'm pretty sure no one would get out alive.
He fell into one of his black moods again, muttering about Tyler and Anna and bacon along the ride back to headquarters. I chose to ignore him (which always worked best in such situations) and let my mind wander to my cat, Lutra, who was no doubt sitting on top of Merle's cage, his tail lazily swishing back and forth, as Merle would hop over to peck at it from inside his house.
I frowned at Dan when he fell silent. That was not normal. After a moment, he started snoring softly. I couldn't suppress my grin.
Finally, he was sleeping.
Mr. Moriarty stopped the limo and opened the door. I prodded Dan in the ribs. "Dan."
He twitched and kept on mumbling in his sleep.
"Dan." I nudged him.
I could've sworn he had an impish smile on his face.
"DAN!" I shouted in his ear. That woke him up. He sprang from his seat with a cry, banging his head on the roof of the car. I rolled my eyes. "Come on, Sleeping Ugly, let's go."
He unbuckled his seatbelt and rubbed his eyes. "What year is it?"
"1912. Come on."
He stumbled out after me and gave Mr. Moriarty a hug. Mr. Moriarty patted him on the back before uneasily slipping out of my friend's drunken grasp and hurrying to close our door. He then scrambled to his own seat and closed his door behind him. I heard the click of the lock as he speedily drove away. Dan's face fell. "Pity. I thought he was just starting to like me."
We entered the headquarters with one thing on our minds: a nap.
Or, that was what I was thinking of.
Dan had given up on sleep again and picked up a book. Somehow I knew it was another one of the old, obscure novels that were his favorites. Maybe something to do with Sherlock Holmes, or the science behind ectoplasm. Or maybe it was a book about bunnies.
With him, you never know.
Lutra discovered I was sitting on my bed (Dan and I share a room) and bounded across the room, pouncing on my stomach as I laid back to stare at the ceiling. Dan had strategically placed a poster that said, "THE GAME" right on the ceiling, so that whenever I would look up, I would lose.
Needless to say, it worked.
I closed my eyes and started to fall asleep when he started humming. Humming. He threw his book to the side and crawled under his bed to find his keyboard, which was my old keyboard that I'd given to him after I got a new one. I groaned and pulled my pillow over my face. "Please don't--"
Too late. Dan was already playing a melody on the keyboard, some new one he'd had stuck up in his mind, no doubt. He paused, tapping one key after another, then played them together in a horrid-sounding chord. Good grief. He started talking out loud--whether to himself, or to me, I wasn't sure. I just knew it was annoying. After what seemed like an hour more of him experimenting with the notes and playing the same tune over and over, he gave up. He turned the keyboard over, ripped the batteries out of the socket, and threw them at me.
"I'm bored." he complained.
"Solve a crossword puzzle. You like crossword puzzles."
"I don't have one!"
"Print one off the internet. And then solve it."
Dan sat on his bed a little longer before relenting and stomping out of the room. After he left, I smiled at the quiet.
Merle started to whistle.
I heard the crash of a laptop being thrown across the room (don't ask how I recognized it) and heard Dan start to rant on about technology before he stopped. I heard his footsteps grow near and before long he was leaning in the doorway. "You'll be interested to know," his voice was level and his eyes looked bored. "That there are dead bodies filling the holding cells."
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 8:14 pm | |
| Awesome! Hehe, "muttering about Tyler and Anna and bacon". I must be extremely important to be talked about in the same sentence as BACON. *gasp*
I can't say much more without babbling or sounding stupid which I'm sure I probably already sound stupid but-
YOU GET WHAT I MEAN.
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Fri Jul 09, 2010 9:22 pm | |
| xDD, 'You'll be interesting to know, that there are dead bodies filling the holding cells.' I died of laughter during this chapter. You are so weird, Socky. xD
Please, WRITE MORE. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Sat Jul 10, 2010 4:05 pm | |
| XD I was over at Otter's house last night, and he read some of the chapter out loud, then demanded to know my plans for the story.
He was convinced I actually had some. XD | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Mon Jul 12, 2010 8:52 am | |
| dysafdklhasfkdashkfldafjdsads;fjd;asjlfd;sajfk;dljsa;lfjdkslafjd;jsa;kfjkdlsajfieajwfpewjcnzx,m. You are letting it dieeeeee. WRITE MOAR. | |
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| | Subject: Re: My Bad! [chapter 9] Mon Jul 12, 2010 5:05 pm | |
| Hey, I'm not supposed to be on the computer, buddy. That and the fact that there was a White Collar marathon sort of deterred me. AND I realized that I hadn't made a trip to the library in a week, which brings lethargy problems. So I got some books.
And I'm lazy. If you'd give me an anonymous quote I would build off that, but NO, you have to go all...all...otter...ish...on me...yeah.
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